OLD AND I MAJORLY FUCKED UP! :( Hey! Posting this since I MIGHT turn into one!
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I'll wait until I'm at work tomorrow before checking out that link.
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Rushy wrote: ↑Fri Dec 28, 2018 12:09 amThere may be, I'm not sure. I just go to fanfiction sites myself.
Allow me to demonstrate: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/260305 ... s-the-cake
Today I learned Rushy writes MLP fanfiction.
I have a few questions for anyone who's willing to answer.
1. Was it immersive enough? My real goal with these is always to get to the clop. But I've discovered in my clop art that you can't just put a sexy pony on a blank background and expect it to be great. The background is important, and I think I'm starting to appreciate that a little build-up is important in stories as well. At the same time, i don't want to bog it down with too much anticipation.
2. How was the pacing? My previous story was a little too rushed. Not as bad as some clopfics I've read on this site, but still seriously lacking there. I think this is better, but I want to know what you think. I'm talking not only about the build-up here, but also the anticipation and pacing in the clop scenes.
3. Did it paint a picture for you? Were the descriptions good enough to put a clear picture in your mind, or did they leave you confused?
4. Spoiler warning: How was the twist at the end? Did you see it coming? Was it foreshadowed too much, too little, or about right? How did you feel about it? Please use spoiler brackets if you decide to respond to this question.
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A DHIer is dying and his thread is hijacked by furfags.
Sounds about right, sadly.
Sounds about right, sadly.

- Le Redditeur
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Not gassing the furries was a huge mistake. Maybe humanity's biggest mistake.
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Godspeed Auli!
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We just need more Lupa thirstposting in here.
Autism attracts more autism. Sooner or later, an internet nobody will attract the exact kind of fans - and detractors - he deserves.
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Before you die auli tweet out "I did not go well" for me. But also don't die

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Can you just say what it is you are suffering from? Is it the Big C? AIDS?
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